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ORIGINAL: This multi-pack approach saves space in the parking lot but with a lessening of system reliability.
BETTER: This multi-pack approach saves space in the parking lot but decreases system reliability.
BEST: This multi-pack approach saves parking lot space at the cost of decreased system reliability.
ORIGINAL: “Your ticket price includes both free parking as well as free pop-corn.”
BETTER: “Your ticket price includes free parking as well as free pop-corn.”
OR: “Your ticket price includes both free parking and free pop-corn.”